Monday, 22 June 2020

Song Based Verses Part Two

Here is the second four of the eight poems I wrote giving my take on a number of different well known songs. The first four poems can be found here.

The songs featured in this entry cover a cross section of musical styles.  I hope you will enjoy reading. 

Song #5 - Call Me by Blondie

This 1980 thunderbolt of a tune is one of my favourite songs by Blondie. It has been covered many times across the last four decades and was the theme to the film 'American Gigolo'. 

The almost surreal lyrics of the song sparked my imagination into life and here is my take on it: 


Bells start ringing
Ruby red, emerald green
As your name ignites
My telephone screen.

I will paint a picture
In pastel shades,
Brush stroke blues
By a shimmering lake.

I will walk barefoot
Across dew-soaked grass
To harness the moment
And make it last.

I will walk over rocks
Worn down by waves,
Soak up words I longed
To hear you say.

I will dance underneath
A silver birch tree,
Feel your heart flutter
Just like the leaves.

I will light you a candle,
Embrace the heat
Flames of recognition
When our eyes meet.

Bells start ringing
Ruby red, emerald green
As your name ignites
My telephone screen.


Song #6 - Nobody's Diary by Yazoo

This song was released as a single in 1983 although it had been written by Alison Moyet several years earlier. I love the heartfelt nature of the lyrics and the emotional delivery Alison does so well.

Several weeks ago I heard this song on the radio for the first time in a long time. As I listened to the story Alison tells through her words I decided this was another candidate for a song based verse.


I can't believe
It has come to this,
Strings of unspoken words
Linger like a last kiss.

Precious memories,
Crisp, clean and concise
Of when hearts were soaring
Like eagles in flight.

Then innermost thoughts
In wiry black ink
Discoloured by time,
Crumpled days of the week.

Lonely teardrops fall,
Misty pools on the page,
Illegible thoughts,
Reflections of pain.

Broken words in a diary
Are all that remain,
The dying embers
Of once raging flames.



Song #7 - I Could Have Danced All Night 

This song features in the musical My Fair Lady, also turned into a film featuring Audrey Hepburn.

Last year it was given a 21st century style makeover by Faultline featuring the vocals of JAKL. This version of the song was used as a backdrop for an Audi TV advert.

The very first time I heard it, for some reason it struck a chord deep inside me and every time I hear the song it provokes a deeply emotional response. A series of clear mental images were subsequently triggered leading to me writing the poem below.


If I hold out my hand
Would you dance with me?
Allow my heart to keep time
As we sweep across the floor.
Catch the light in our eyes
As they shine diamond bright,
Watch the background fade out
As we swirl around once more.

If I hold out my hand
Would you dance with me?
Grand pianos are playing
Somewhere in the distance
Like the tinkling backdrop
Of a black and white film,
Capturing the moment,
Silver dreams and romance.

If I hold out my hand
Would you dance with me?
Reach high, swoop low,
Step on paths we've never known,
Marvel at a mountain view,
Dive into the oceans blue,
Before the warmth of our smiles
Slowly carries us back home.





Song #8 - Kayleigh by Marillion

I am currently in the process of writing my first book and the poem below plus the song 'Kayleigh' will feature in it. The contents of the poem are loosely based on Fish's wonderful poetic lyrics but also form a part of my own story line.


They met when they were eighteen
On a balmy July night,
In a misty teenage haze
It felt like love at first sight.

She was his ballerina
As she danced upon the grass,
They caressed under the moonlight,
Made each tender moment last.

She wore a purple bow
In her curly golden hair,
Tiny sparks of warm excitement
When his eyes met hers.

Blinded by young love
They ignored what others said,
They married two years later
Confetti scattered in their heads.

Neither of them really knew
When love disintegrated,
Fragments of what could have been
Like snow, evaporated.

Heads echoed with unspoken words,
Fear of the unknown,
Trembling fingers hovered
But never reached the phone.

Snowdrops bowed their graceful heads
And clouds eclipsed the stars,
Raindrops washed away their tears
But did not mend their broken hearts.



Thank you as always to everyone who takes the time to read my poetry. I will be back very soon with more of the same.

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